#1
hi everyone, just finished this one. i like it but for some reason im kinda nervous about posting so be nice. as i was writing i was kind of humming The White Stripes- Ball and Biscuit in my head, i kind of pictured it with that beat and it has the same blues/rock feel to it with alot of hard guitar, so if you know the song, you may want keep that in mind while reading.


(intro)

im leavin... (guitar riff follows here)
would you even notice if i didnt come home
i think you would
i think you care more than you'd let me know

alone sounds more appealing
and i've got a feeling
that thats the way its gunna stay
(quietly) and i think id like it that way

(guitar solo 1)

you feel so needed
all i need is a drink and a guitar
our relationship is done girl
good things can only go so far

cause alone sounds more appealing
and i've got a feeling
that thats the way its gunna stay
(quietly) you know its better off this way

(guitar solo 2)

think about it girl
when i do i cringe in pain
if this feeling continues,
i swear i'm gunna go insane

i got something to tell you
the truth is i've hated being away
im coming home soon
this time im gunna stay

with you sounds more appealing
and i've got a feeling
that thats the way its gunna stay
(quietly) yeah

(outro)
"I sorta don't trust anyone who doesn't like Led Zeppelin"
-Jack White
#2
I really like the title for starters, quite attention grabbing.

I know the song you're referring to, and I think I got the flow right..but yeah I thought it was alright, a decent effort man =].

The only bit I didn't think much of was this;
you feel so needed
all i need is a drink and a guitar
our relationship is done girl
good things can only go so far

...I think it's a thing with the word Guitar in songs, doesn't seem right to me personally.