#1
Ok, my friend wrote this song and wants to use it in our band, i told him it was horrible, however i am a bit baised considering i usually write the songs. What do you think?

He's evrywhere and nowhere alwways at the same exact time
lurkin in the shadows, i dono' where to hide
walkin down the street i feel he's close behind
it's only him that i wish i could find
cuz.....
evrytime i turn around he's starin' in my eyes
lookin at me through the darkness, sneaking like a spy
cuz he's my stalker, always out there, watchin me day and night
but you know what i'll be alright.... (ALRIGHT, ALRIGHT!)
evrynite before i sleep i check out my window
just to be sure that i am alone
be-cause
evrytime i turn around he's starin' in my eyes
lookin at me through the darkness, sneaking like a spy
cuz he's my stalker, always out there, watchin me day and night!
but i'll be alright.... (ALRIGHT, ALRIGHT!)
maybe some day he'll stop given me a scare
but til' then.....
evrytime i close my eyes he'll be in my nightmare
atleest until i get out of here....
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#2
I actually kind liked it. The rhyming gets a lil repetative, but it's kinda cool, sounds like Metallica meets Green Day.

...and you shouldn't be biased about other peopel in your band wanting to write songs, the more the better, different people's views and music can open up loads more windows for a band's creative talent.

Get it recorded!
#3
First, the song sucks. Second, you didn't follow the rules. Song title has to be the title of the thread. Delete this and repost. That will help the thread. I'm not sure there's any hope for the song.

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#4
Next time read the FAQ please. Threa title = song title, no title = untitled.
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