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I wasn't trying to get a huge point across here i was just trying to write a simple song but there's still some lines I don't like (The obvious cliche lines) I'd like some help with that. crit4crit obviously

I'll Never Let You

When you tell me
You're gonna leave me soon
You know I'd never let you go
Another fight
That doesn't make me right
But trust me when I say you'll never know
We've gone so far
We've never been this far before
And I never want to go this far again
I'll eat my words
If you promise me you'll stay
And I promise you I'll never let this end

I'll never let you leave me
I'll never let you run away from me

They gave us words
To keep our secrets from being heard
And I've got lots to keep from you
Nothing's perfect
And it's never gonna be
But I can't survive without you
I'll let you whine
But that won't get you anywhere
But if it's what you want then I don't care
And I have problems
And I know it's hard for you
But when has life ever been fair?

I'll never let you leave me
I'll never let you run away from me

I'll scream your name
And I don't mind if people hear
As long as you take me back
I bought these flowers
So I could show you that I care
I need you by my side

I'll never let you leave me
I'll never let you run away from me
Last edited by private at Jan 21, 2007,