I love the tone on the first clean guitar, not so much on the second one. Seems too busy, if that makes any sense. Would've been better to record vocals for this song, doubling the vocal line on guitar doesn't seem to work.

The playing is good though, just a few mistakes here and there, especially on the hammer on rhythm. You should make the solo stick out in the mix more, and make it more interesting.

Overall, nice job

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