#1
This the third song i wrote it gets pretty weird near end i think?

Hell and High Waters


Verse 1
You think this war is turning the tide?
Can’t you just let go of your pride?
There is no dragon in the cave,
Since I know this is all you grave

Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore,

Verse 2
There bodies pile, mass graves
All died, in your name,
You say you do it to stop all wars,
Isn’t it ironic that you cause some more?

Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore,

Interlude
Your search for black gold,
Is going cold,
Never thinking weather is right,
Never considering your own might,
Sat in your suit,
Leading people with your flute,
Claiming that you’re setting them loose,
They don’t realise that,
Your just tying there noose,


Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore,

Verse 3
Didn’t you find what you were looking for?
Was it a needless war?
Still looking for excuses to stay?
Why couldn’t you just leave them,
There own way?


Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore,

Verse 4
Do think its right?
Sending the young to fight?
Trying to make people think your own way,

*guitar fill bit then go slow*

We were played by our politicians,
With false accusations,
Never letting our voices be heard,
Always treating us like sleep herd,
If we truly want to rock,
We must ascend from the flock,
And give it all back,
Take back the pain,
The Suffering, The fear,
Give it all to the cause,
The cause of the war *Scream War*


Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore,
#2

Verse 1
You think this war is turning the tide?
Can’t you just let go of your pride?
There is no dragon in the cave,
Since I know this is all you grave last line seems confusing

Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore, Nice verse, but IMO the cursing takes away from it, try to take it out

Verse 2
There bodies pile, mass graves
All died, in your name,
You say you do it to stop all wars,
Isn’t it ironic that you cause some more?Bad flow IMO, try to make it flow better

Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore,

Interlude
Your search for black gold,
Is going cold,
Never thinking weather is right,
Never considering your own might,
Sat in your suit,
Leading people with your flute,
Claiming that you’re setting them loose,
They don’t realise that,
Your just tying there noose, a little long, and flows wierd


Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore,

Verse 3
Didn’t you find what you were looking for?
Was it a needless war?
Still looking for excuses to stay?
Why couldn’t you just leave them,
There own way? again, has a wierd flow


Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore,

Verse 4
Do think its right?
Sending the young to fight?
Trying to make people think your own way,Eh...nothing special, but it's okay, plus a little too short for a verse

*guitar fill bit then go slow*

We were played by our politicians,
With false accusations,
Never letting our voices be heard,
Always treating us like a sheep herd,
If we truly want to rock,
We must ascend from the flock,
And give it all back,
Take back the pain,
The Suffering, The fear,
Give it all to the cause,
The cause of the war *Scream War*


Chorus
But I shall fight for you,
Through hell,
And high waters,
Your men shall be there,
Without a thought,
Or a care,
You just give excuses,
But there ****ing useless,
Cause they don’t trust you anymore,

Eh, it's okay, there's not much of a flow going on, the verses are too short compared to the chorus, and the interlude seems too long IMO. I don't like how it's political, not really into that, but to each his own. 6/10. If you get a chance could you check mine out please? Thanks (check my sig)