#1
maybe avenged sevenfold style...but it is my very own. take a look at it then rate it!
(the file made with GP 5.1 so you'll need that version of guitar pro )
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#2
Avenged Sevenfold style?
Didn't sound very A7x to me...

BUT, I liked it regardless.

Quite catchy in some parts.
Prechorus/Chorus was espeicially good!

Now my fxcking PC is saying there isn't enough resources.

It stopped after the chorus.

I'll crit the rest when my laptop is working again and I don't have to use my dad's pc.

So far, 8/10.
I deeply regret the 6661 in my username. Siiiigh. Damn you, 14 year old me, you edgy little bastard.
Last edited by Carl6661 at Mar 25, 2008,
#3
Your intro was very catchy, but you really need to provide a more solid low end, put your basslines down an octave to give it more punch.

Hell, that's all that really needs to be said about the whole damn song. It would be great if you had a stronger rhythm and bass presence. Very nice solo as well.

(Return crit: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=820021)
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