#1
My first real song. It's just my views on the situation in general, although it reminds me of this girl I know.

It sounds a little emo I know, but it's my first, so be nice.

Comments, suggestions are appreciated.


They’ve promised change before,
It came with time, but no more,
When it matters more to act than be,
We’re all itching at our apathy,
Asleep in our discontent,
Pain lurks outside with out motives bent,
When it matters more to act than be,
You’ll find you can no longer see

We’re blinded by our false ambitions,
We can’t tell what we want,
We long for something deeper,
Too bad we all forgot

And in the time we need each other most,
We’ve lost all faith in anything real,
When you mean more than anyone,
You matter less than anything,
Would it hurt if we stopped turning away?
To face our fears,
Why not today?

We’re blinded by our false ambitions,
We can’t tell what we want,
We long for something deeper,
Too bad we all forgot

We weren’t made to feel this pain,
From what we’ve lost no one has gained,
Things don’t have to be this way,
So wake up world,
You have something to say.


(I've written music to it as well...)

edit: ya happy now stratkat? Apparently I'm a songwriting forum noob
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#3
hmm...

Ug is giving me no love, but I guess I did post it during rush hour...
Gibson SG Standard
Fender 52 RI Telecaster
'77 Deluxe Reverb
Sunface w/ SunDial
MXR Carbon Copy
Crybaby



Quote by Sid McCall
Epic win. He speaks the truth, boys and girls.



Founder of the Neutral Milk Hotel club PM to join~