Thanks for reading in advance. definitely not done, please help with what i already have, and how to get going on the next stuff. Crit for crit if you leave a link.

i'm not the best person,
i'm sure you've thought he's had better
but i love your son
more than anyone else could
he gives me the
"why can't i breathe?" sensation
the feeling where
i know he deserves more than just
an "i love you."
is it that hard for you to understand?

Maybe if you set the standards
a little bit lower
and stopped raising the bar so high
i wouldn't let you down
maybe if you took time to look at me
you'd come to see
that i'm all your son needs