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I will be chaning this, I always edit my writing given a day or so, but I'd like to get some opinions on it.

Intro

Verse 1 (instrumental)

Verse 2

The earth shakes
And ignorance
Fades
Eden starts to die

The siren tells
Her sorrow,
But
Is not worried

Hasty retreat
Fueled by
Fear compliments
The taste of the air

Pain is
Like a drug
Needed to
Sustain the addict

Verse 3
Forced entry leads
To a discovery
White spheres melt
From the deep red
Seizure of power and
Removal of arms
And you refuse to take my hand…

The escape act won’t
Cover up your scars
The false sorrow and
The open wounds
Hiding behind the wood,
I met a corpse
And it refused to take my hand…


Chorus
Time is the enemy, it’s
Changing your mentality

Time is the enemy, and it’s
Taking you from me

Devastation beyond belief
Altered mentality

Time was your enemy, it
Made you run from me

Bridge

But still you
Live
And I,
Won’t let you fade
Away

And you still
Fight
And I,
Can’t let you win
I’m sorry

I can’t give
Up on you
Yet, and yet
You refuse

To give up
Your struggle
Against
Yourself

Your self destructive tendencies will
End everything, one day
It’s just a matter of time

Verse 1 (instrumental)

Verse 2

Lights dance
On the trees
While the
Sky dreams in color

Lights dance
On the tress
This night
Will consume us

Your mistakes
Have led to
This
Night of sorrow

We will
All pay
It’s just
A matter of time

Verse 3
Decay is setting in
On the idle
Losses en mass
For the ungrateful
Wounds close as
Scars multiply
And the liquid begins to slide down…

Colors begin to fade
On the inside
Bleeding vibrant beauty
As they die
Flesh closes and the
Eyes open
And the tears begin to slide down…

Chorus
Time is the enemy, it’s
Changing your mentality

Time is the enemy, and it’s
Taking you from me

Devastation beyond belief
Altered mentality

Time was your enemy, it
Made you run from me

Bridge
But still you
Live
And I,
Won’t let you fade
Away

And you still
Fight
And I,
Can’t let you win
I’m sorry

I can’t give
Up on you
Yet, and yet
You refuse

To give up
Your struggle
Against
Yourself

Your self destructive tendencies will
End everything, one day
It’s just a matter of time

Thanks in advance.