#1
Anyway if you want to hear my bands orginal song you can hear it here

http://10KommonErrorz.bebo.com

Its there under songs titled "Alien (run for your life)" let me know what you think.

yes it is on bebo, we were draged onto it, we were forced (im not a fan of bebo)

i'm not gonna give to much information, you can listen to it for urself to find all that out.

If ur a member of bebo u can become a groupie if you fell liek it, or even leave an ole comment (make sure if u leave a comment say u heard bout it from this fourm)

Thanks and hope you like it.
Gear:
Gibson Les Paul Custom (black beauty)
Yamaha ERG-121C
Oakman acoustic
#2
Its alright.. The singer sounds like he's 12. I say drop the singer and you'll be good.

EDIT: I didn't know it was a girl. I still say drop the singer. Other then that its pretty good.
#3
the singer is acutally a girl
Gear:
Gibson Les Paul Custom (black beauty)
Yamaha ERG-121C
Oakman acoustic
#4
The guitars were all done pretty well, the drums were a little tough to hear but from what I heard they were pretty good; It's all mixed pretty well; The vocals(as in the singer) sounded really 80's-ish...in the bad way...I didn't like that aspect of the song, but other than that this song is pretty well done. The solo is pretty neat, it fits in pretty well but the bend at the end is a little gross; It's a good song, you just need to fix up the vocals a bit, there was nothing wrong with them, it's just a matter of my personal preference. The vocals were good, just not to MY liking, doesn't mean they were bad or anything so please don't think I'm saying they suck;

Crit me? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=510972