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peter.. (16 year old Male)
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Basics
Username: peter..
Age: 16
Sex: Male
Location: Canada
Interests
Art: Singing, Song Writing
Music: Acoustic, Emo, Indie, Punk
Musical Instruments: Acoustic guitar
hersmile
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Beauty Canvas-byme

We live in a world of artificals
A world of insicurities and fakes.
We live in a world were unoriginal
is the only form of beauty or acceptance

For everythnig that weve been given
We try to tante it, change it
Into what we think we want to be
Just rip away the perfections that we realy are

What once was beauty, is merely jsut a canvas
a canvas for what people want to be
What once was pure, is now just a back ground
a background for how they wish to be seen

They cover them selfs with their fears
and they try to recreate what they see in everybody else
Trying to conform to similarities
to look just like the next

If only they would reaize that each one,
of them has their own form of beauty
there is no need for this, conformaty any more.
Just be yourself, be uniqe,original


peter
HolyCross
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howieday,jamesblunt,jackjohnson,spillcanvas,thirde yeblind,teddygeiger,stabilo,angels+airwaves
Redhotchilli,nirvana,acdc,mitalica,korn,millencoll in,redjumpsuitapparatus,gabebonic,johnmayer
ledzeplin,blink182,sum41alexisonfire,coldplay,nirv ana,billytallent,weezer


for you i will
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Her Smile-byme


Did you msile at me
Because my day just got brigheter
The shadows left my mind n,
the tears have left my eyes


Everything seems brighter
The worlds been flipped right around
Im no logner up side down
Or inside out

Here is where i feel right
In the light of your smile,
Where the future is still bright
With_____ You_______.


Thunder may klash
Waves may Crash
Fire may burn
But ill stand strong

Stars may fall
And the world may fail
Wind may blow
But i will still have your smile


Did you msile at me
Because my day just got brigheter
The shadows left my mind n,
the tears have left my eyes


Until the thunder stops klashing
and the waves stop crashing
and fire stops burning
Ill stand strong

Until the stars stop falling
and the world stops failing
and the wind stops blowing
Ill stand strong.


Memory
It is like a nightmare
your so close but your still not there
Im trapped in this world alone
My own thoughts tormenting my dream.

Your seem so distand from me
to close to touch, to close to see.
I thought we might get a go at hope
Might get a stab at eternity

The sound of your voice still ringing thru my head
and i still remeber the last thing you said.
I dont belive in a thing called love,
dont belive in the white dove,
dont belive in ones happiness
dont belive in a pretty princess
atleast not with you.

It is like a nightmear
your so close but your still not there
im trapped in this world alone
just the memory of your voice on the phone.

The hardest part, knowing were apart
and your someone elses sweetheart
why is it you give him a chance
and the whitedress,the white dove
the four letter word love.
#2
wow. ok on beauty canvas..... i could not have said it any better. I have been saying this all for years. I never thought to write it down, though. You did an amazing job. Great way to start off the whole thing, too. the first stanza... well dang. the first sentence even just caught my eye and made me want to read on. my faves were the first, third, and fourth stanzas. and nice title!!

on her smile...... very um DONE and stuff .. like everyone has done something like this but i like the first stanza a lot! that is THE BEST ever ha. sooooo sweeeeettt!! even though ive heard things done on this subject MANY times I actually felt like it was all new to me because of the wording. i liked the wording a lot. very different.

THEY WERE BOTH AWESOME! ur a good writer!
Why do I let myself drown n the tears Ive cried4u over&over again When I know that u wont rescue me?
THE HARDEST GIFT2GIVE IS LOVE U KNOW IS NOT RETURNED
Whats the point n smilin if u hav no1 2smile4
#3
man i think your being to nice
but that means alot to hear that
i havnt gotten very good replies on ne of my songs
so thanks man
these are my first two songs ive written
#4
yeah..well i am not being nice! I am being for real!!! u are great! whoever gave bad replies are nuts

WOW FIRST TWO!!!??? that is amazing! ur awesome! most people do not start out that good!!!

keep it up!! lol...
<3 Keri <3
Why do I let myself drown n the tears Ive cried4u over&over again When I know that u wont rescue me?
THE HARDEST GIFT2GIVE IS LOVE U KNOW IS NOT RETURNED
Whats the point n smilin if u hav no1 2smile4
#5
aha thankss i will for sure
well not my first writing, i used to write poems n all that

but my first songs
with actualy chord progression n all that

but thanks i will for sure