#1
eh, I was home sick today and was playing guitar and this just sorta came out with this song I was working on. What ya guys think?

Communicate to dissipate the medicated masses
Turn around and smile down as the pain passes...

...Through
You don't know what to do
What to hold on to...
...You don't know what to do

Understand that thy loving hand isn't loving you
So take it back or stand your ground as the pain finds it's way through...

...To you
You don't know what to do
What to hold on to...
...You don't know what to do

The Lady with her pale watchful gaze will watch over you
And kiss Her twice by Her loving hand when the moon shines new...

...It's true
You know what to do
What to hold on to...
...You know what to do...
...It's true
The Lady love you
She'll protect you...
...From all you go through
Last edited by Vos at Jan 23, 2007,
#2
wow, i can see a slight resemblance to an old poem of mine.
except mine was about suicide.
sorry cant post opinion, im too biased