#1
My first song in forever, and my first post here. All critique and slams are welcome.

Dollar Store

Bleach Shoes
Pink Pants
Grey Hair
Broken Stance

Just hearing you
Stirs up in me
Come follow now
I’m out sick in the back street

Outside the dollar store
I hate you ‘cause you’re just too cheap
I hate you ‘cause you’re just like me

You just don’t see
Why I’m choking
Just look lower
I’m never self provoking

Outside the dollar store
I hate you ‘cause you’re just too cheap
I hate you ‘cause you’re just like me