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I would really appreciate your crits. Its my first post. Most likely a angry punk song.

You use to be my best friend
we said we’d be together till the end
but then you decided to be
better than me.

Shut the **** up
its not about you
shut the **** up
and look around you

You became too cool
started acting like a tool
lost touch inside
our friendship has died

Shut the **** up
its not about you
shut the **** up
and look around you

I hate to tell you
but it is true
the world does not
revolve around you.

Shut the **** up
its not about you
shut the **** up
and look around you
Last edited by unity11 at Jan 24, 2007,