#1
Ive tried something again, and im interested in what you guys think about it..

C4C


Black Wholes

I found black wholes
in my memory…
Sucking up emotions
non-existant…

I can’t help but te see
things were better how they used to be.

Shades from the past
become like colours for cavemen.
Forgotten tragedy,
A meaning of life

Feeling that never were dominate
My newly distorted mind
There are just too many thoughts
My brain can combine

Black and white
become a silver lining
for clouds that will, eventually,
rain down again.
Into my river of positive negatives
of paparazzi stalkers, time-walkers
who forgot the tentative perspectives
of time…

but why? Why?
Are the emotions so pure?
So real yet obscure?
So unreachably close…
#2
Don't you mean 'black holes'?

And it seems too artsy (and dare I say, emo?) to me. We've seen these kinds of things a million times before but I guess it is from a personal level so I can't jab you on that. There's a few good lines in there.
#3
Quote by Archaon
Don't you mean 'black holes'?

And it seems too artsy (and dare I say, emo?) to me. We've seen these kinds of things a million times before but I guess it is from a personal level so I can't jab you on that. There's a few good lines in there.


I do mean black wholes and thanks for taking a look