#1
This is the third song ive worked on. Im thinking about deleting bars 30-46 and using it for another song, but I haven't decided. I haven't had a chance to start on bass


Edit: I've updated check the bottom post
Last edited by fav13andac1)c at Jan 31, 2007,
#2
this feel really random, theres no groove to it, i dont knwo whats what. its more of a collection of a bunch of basic rock riffs than a song
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#3
The intro was pretty cool but afterwards it seemed like just random whims. Expand upon the intro.
#5
well that was um...strange lol. i didnt really get parts of it =\ like the intro, not too sure about that and bars 91-92 was just a bit random lol. but some parts sounded great like from bars 34-45 and the riff from bar 46-51. the solo sounded awesome too, harmonization at bar 71-72 was sweet xD, made me pull a rock face like this XD. but the overall sound kinda didnt go, sounded like a couple different songs thrown together into one. lil bit of TLC and it could be somethin special tho 7/10.

also was weird when i extracted the file, thought i was getting your entire documents n settings folder lol.

anyhoo

crit mine =P?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=514912
#8
ok disregard what i said before. its pretty rockin, the solo was really good and i liked the way u used differnt time signatures.
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Quote by xX Maverick Xx
sorry to bust everyones bubble but lamb of god arent "hardcore" theyre death metal, and therefore metal.
#10
it's definitely different. btw thanks for my crit, and now onto yours again. I really think the chorus sounds silly, but some of it is probably the way midi makes it sound. Other than that it's pretty good; the bass solo seems a little erratic, but that's just me. Nice work overall!
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