#1
Always chasing the sun,
I tried to match it.

Wouldn't you love to lead,
seperate only,(walk away)
oweing a million,
caught by the turn,
taking the odd step,
pedestrian to myself,

Passages lost in prayer,
I'm sorry,(just leave)
I'm not yours,
brail conversations,
thanks for making,
this impossible,

Always chasing the sun,
I tried, I, I, (I lost)
I tried to match it,
call me something bad,
now you are rid of me.

I wrote it today in school, I am thinking about altering it but I am going to leave it alone for a bit. Just wanted to see what you guys thought. Please check out my links, crit for crit.