#1
Verse
every angle, of every defeat
one man stands above a clould before he meets
On a rising bird, in the dessert storm
A little thought in the back of your mind
A little hate just to make feel alright
I know, a way of confession
dont preach to me how to be alive

course
its time to bring down , bring down
what
its time to bring down, bring downnnn
WHAT
bring down, bring down, bring down, bring downnnnnn

verse 2
i see far into the ocean of your eyes
i feel distance between your lies
breaking the chain, finding dissorder
a little laugh in the heart of your pride
a little notice of the hate that you hide
i know, a way to reach the limits
dont pull me from my reasons

course
its time to bring down, bring down
what
its time to bring down bring downnnn
WHAT !
its time to bring down, bring down, bring down, bring downnn
well what are you afraid of
im not moving forward, just reach to your rage
just reach to your heart sayy...
its time to bring down..bring down
bring down bring down
bring down..bring..DOWN !!!
solo
#2
a classic piece..i like this line " i see far into the ocean of your eyes, i feel distance between your lines "..nice work man
#4
its alot like system of a down, but i think its a little more love songish, i liked it

crit mine plz?
Don't try engaging me
The vaguest of shrugs
The prescription drugs
You'll never find
A person inside

Quote by saphrax
I agree with This End Up
#6
I can really feel the lyrics in this song, Its just way you wrote it makes me feel as though I've been there before... Nice piece.
Dark Blue, Dark Blue, Have you ever been alone in a crowded room, well I'm Here with you now.
#8
Not bad to be honest. After reading the other comments I can actually see the soad reference. I hope I don't have to tell you that coarse is spelled chorus and that it's just a typo in the heap of writing. I really do like the first two lines, their good. It's a little bit short as far as a song so I think another verse or bridge could be put into it, so there's room for improvement.

And if you have time could you crit my song, "face the demons" the link is below or on the page.