#1
Heya!

Well I was first going to post this in the "Shred Masterclass" sticky (that's where I belong! )but then I though it would be slightly off topic...

So here it is, my Youtube smash hit video - I wrote the song a month ago it's called "Collection of Sins".

$10000 smash hit video

Looking forward to your comments!

Kris

PS Does this qualify "YOUR band"? "ME band" would be more suitable!
#2
interesting...too much genitals for my taste, but not horrible....I'm gonna have to say $8000 smash hit, it's not quite 10k.
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#3
The lyrics were intersting I didn't really like the vocals but the guitar parts were cool and the solo was wicked
#4
dude that song rocked i like the riffs used

tab it, i wont steal it.....:P lol joke dnt worry
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#5
I was about to come and slate someone for being so cocky, but when i got here i was just like "oh it's kris, nevermind". heh

not to mention, the song is actually really good. Nice one!
#6
You're the man Kris! Very grim. The main riff is catchy, and the solo was good stuff as well. It is obvious that you put some time into this, so good job!

ps. I check UG like twice a day to see if you put up any new lessons, and since I don't have high speed, it takes like 12 hours straight of downloading for each of your shred masterclass lessons. Thanks alot for putting all that together. Tommy G
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#8
Haha, that song got attitude, actually reminds me of Velvet Revolver/Guns N' Roses, I like the vocals haha

AND MY GOD!!
On the solo you made that B note (am I correct) on the A string with the wah and bend sound SSSOOO TASTEFUL!

(tabs for the solo? )


EDIT: btw, what Wah Wah pedal do you use
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#9
Guitar is amazing but lyrics are rubbish
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#10
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Haha, that song got attitude, actually reminds me of Velvet Revolver/Guns N' Roses, I like the vocals haha

AND MY GOD!!
On the solo you made that B note (am I correct) on the A string with the wah and bend sound SSSOOO TASTEFUL!

(tabs for the solo? )


EDIT: btw, what Wah Wah pedal do you use


Well perhaps this could be something for a UG video lesson

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#12
The whole song + the lyrics were great! But I think you're trying to use too many ranges of your voice? Maybe you should cut out that really high part at "iiiiiiiits my collection of sins..." that really got annoying, lol but otherwise very cool!
#15
Thanks heaps guys!! The appreciation means a lot - as this kind of stuff is very new to me!

Kris
#16
Rofl much?

Burying your genitals!
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#18
good work man, luved the solo =D

tabs? ... hint hint lol

... no really can ya tab the solo? seriously its awesome lol
#21
haha i love it dude, its an instant classic. The vox are bad, but so good at the same time. Id totally buy a cd like that haha. call it crotch rock. "bury your genitals!!"....pure gold man.
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#24
Very rocknroll i must say.it suits my taste.nice one there Kris! but i must agree that your range of voice seemed to go all over the place with this one.Musically very good,but get someone to sing for you,or practice more in voice this time
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#28
Hmmm... Think you maybe be pushing the price alittle..

The chorus was a little weird for me... couldnt make out what you were singin at all.. but over all decent!

the second part of the solo was sexy!!
#29
Nice guitar work...Sounds like something Jake E. Lee or Slash would riff up....

Solo was nice, wasn't all speed and shit like that, seemed to have some feeling to it...

Lyrically speaking, it was interesting, but I don't get it all...


Overall fun song to listen to, if I was to iPod it or not iPod it.....I would iPod it...

#31
its a good song
the videos takin ages to load so im getting it in snippets
its very cool
not a big fan of the genitals though
lol
umm im liking your playing very much
XD
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#32
funkin awesome, the vocals remind me of a cross between Richard Hell and Stiv Bators in his Lords of the New Church years amazing really, i think the vocals are perhaps the best part of the song the range is beautiful and the solo puts it over the top awesome job
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#37
super retro hard rock guitar. (i dont like that) but i did enjoy the retro, good job on that !('_')!

for a second it was sort of A7Xsounding.