This is a hard song for me but I tried my best.

i know that it is screwed up right before the solo starts but other than that all crit is appreciated.

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intro: sounds a bit stiff, try sliding into those strums, and dont forget the hammer ons cos i think you've missed them out. i think you should play with a metronome or maybe a backing track from guitarbt.com because your timing in the verses is off quite a lot. as for the solo, it doesnt sound like you've got the correct chord progression for it, which is why it sounds a bit odd behind it, but maybe its just the timing of the two. i definitely suggest you re record with a metronome behind the song and post again, the difference shall be vast i think.

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