I saw you two come out of the coffee house, you had a smile on your face he had his hand on your waist. You two look so great together all of a sudden Im felling under the weather ((Later))

(chorus) Dont try to hide it cause I wont buy it, I guess its time to try something new.

I dont get it I thought you where happy but it seems to me that my work is crappy.

Verse 1
Verse 2

Tell me what you think and what I should change thanks! (sorry I needed to make the title different)
Its ok. I would need to hear the riff to judge it though.
I think a great riff or melody can transform a crap song to something awesome.
Its a good try!

I would rate this 7/10


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