#1
These are lyrics I came up with just now.


Im Going Crazy -

****, ****, ****, ****, ****, ****
I'm going crazy here

Jealousy and paranoia sweeping into my body
Tearing and biting at my heart

He's cheating, cheating, cheating on you
He doesn't, doesn't, doesn't love on you

He shows it
He loves me
He wants me for eternity

No he's gone too far
Things have gone too far
You're suppose to be a fling
Some rebound

****!

Voices tearing me apart
My brain is taking sides
I'm not normal
I'm an outcast from the outcasts


****, ****, ****, ****, ****, ****
I'm going crazy here

All I want is tranquility
Serenity
Peace

But all I get is hatred
Malicious gossip within my cavity

Please make it stop
Make the bad person leave
Make it stop
Make it stop
Make it stop
Make it stop
Make it stop
Gear
BC Rich guitars
Crate amps


Heres my thrash song guitar demos - Thrash demos
#2
Quote by metallideth2
These are lyrics I came up with just now.


Im Going Crazy -

****, ****, ****, ****, ****, ****
I'm going crazy here

Jealousy and paranoia sweeping into my body
Tearing and biting at my heart

He's cheating, cheating, cheating on you
He doesn't, doesn't, doesn't love on youchange the"love on you" to "love you"

He shows it
He loves me
He wants me for eternity

No he's gone too far
Things have gone too far
You're suppose to be a fling
Some reboundmabe change it to"some rebound thong"

****!

Voices tearing me apart
My brain is taking sides
I'm not normal
I'm an outcast from the outcasts


****, ****, ****, ****, ****, ****
I'm going crazy here

All I want is tranquility
Serenity
Peace

But all I get is hatred
Malicious gossip within my cavity

Please make it stop
Make the bad person leavethis line isnt good, try rewording it
Make it stop
Make it stop
Make it stop
Make it stop
Make it stop



ok thats about it, its decent, mabe 7/10

crit mine

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=514001

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=8064195#post8064195