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Not a bad effort, I think there's a decent song in there, you just need to keep working on it. All the tempo changes are a bit off-putting at the start, but it seems to make some sense by the end. Keep working on the guitar to get rid of the mistakes, then when you've done that you could try embellish it a bit.

You're voice sounds interesting though, but again I'd say practice more.

Listened to it a second time - yeah, it's not bad. Keep at it. Good stuff.

(edit - I quite like your version of mardi bum by the way, except you can't hear the vocals )
Last edited by jaykayzer at Jan 26, 2007,