#2
i dont think that the half time feel worked too well, it just like it was slowed down to learn a riff or sumthing. the outro was awesome, especially the chord that rang out. i think that would be a devastatingly awesome interlude/breakdown. it was just great. a solo would be cool too altho this does not need it, it wouldnt really help i just love solos lol. overall this is really great, still damn good death metal

if you could crit mine id really appreciate it
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#4
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i dont think that the half time feel worked too well, it just like it was slowed down to learn a riff or sumthing. the outro was awesome, especially the chord that rang out. i think that would be a devastatingly awesome interlude/breakdown. it was just great. a solo would be cool too altho this does not need it, it wouldnt really help i just love solos lol. overall this is really great, still damn good death metal


What measure are you talking about for the half time thing? there's a lot of slower parts so i jsut wanna make it clear for when i work on it.


Quote by saddam

I didn't like it too much, the other song you posted here was a lot better... . It could really use a solo, and the riff from bar 22-29 is almost exactly the same as in the other song. Still it's not bad, not at all, just a little, i don't know, bland... .


Thanks for pointing that out dude, didn't realize that haha. This one still needs a lot of work. The other song i posted went thru dozens of corrections this one i jsut finished a few days ago.

thanks for the crits guys!
#5
the slow part that is very boring starts at around measure 33, but i liked the rest, and i agree your other song was much better, yet this is a cool one to, i would love to hear some good ol' tech metal recording
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#7
the slow part of the song is good it just seems to drag on but the riffs are good and i love the drums, any drumer who plays the symbols alot i love. but it is tech/death and it does need a killer solo

but other than that the riffs are good and i enjoyed it 8/10
#8
Pretty sweet, i like the stuff around 50-60, id really love to get the demo, i mean methodical annihilation is ****ing kick ass! Good luck with your band
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