#2
your nirvana influence is too heavy. sounds just like heart-shaped box...but besides that... the guitar, drums, and vocals all need a lot of work
#3
Quote by thorg
your nirvana influence is too heavy. sounds just like heart-shaped box...but besides that... the guitar, drums, and vocals all need a lot of work


+1. Its a rip off of heart shaped box, and everything needs a lot of improvement.
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#4
It's as much of a rip off to Heart Shaped Box as The Casulaties song Get Off My Back is a rip off of The Offspring's Self Esteem.