well, it does sound a bit messy, but the melody lines are cool i like em. good harmonies. though if your gonna make it into a song u might wanna put some more riffs with out the leads. well the tapping thing was ok, the recording quality didnt help much to distinguish...but overall its promising
here are my ideas https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=510015 (like yours the quality aint that good)