#1
This is a first post for me...

Verse:
look in me and you will see my little world of make belief
and i find myself setting all my sorrows free
the pain subsides and im trying to hide, this shit builds up inside
and i find myself thinking about you and i

Chorus:
life of illusion, lost in confusion
lost in myself once again
trying to find things in my mind
that tell me this is not the end
im lost in myself again

Verse:
look in my eyes and dont say your high, enough with all these ****ing lies
and i find myself saying my last goodbye
the pain is here and im full of fear, this shit is nothing near
and i find myself forgetting about you, my dear

Chorus:
life of illusion, lost in confusion
lost in myself once again
trying to find things in my mind
that tell me this is not the end
im lost in myself again

And that is all i have so far....may need a lil more work...
#2
Verse:
look in me and you will see my little world of make belief
and i find myself setting all my sorrows free
the pain subsides and im trying to hide, this shit builds up inside
and i find myself thinking about you and i

Chorus:
life of illusion, lost in confusion
lost in myself once again
trying to find things in my mind
that tell me this is not the end
im lost in myself again

Verse:
look in my eyes and dont say your high, enough with all these ****ing lies
and i find myself saying my last goodbye
the pain is here and im full of fear, this shit is nothing near
and i find myself forgetting about you, my dear-you should take off the "my dear" it sounds liek a forced rhyme.

Chorus:
life of illusion, lost in confusion
lost in myself once again
trying to find things in my mind
that tell me this is not the end
im lost in myself again


very good, i loved it, it had tons of internal rhyme, which is good, cuz not pple use it alot.

crit mine
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=513467