#1
Corruption
intro::
Angels, sky lines
whispers, ( a few times )

Verse
Opened the door, an leading
Searching my whole life for the un seen
A little wait , time after time
Awoke in a burning light, im free to say
im walkin..
im walkin..

course:
Falling down from the sky, fallling down into the burning fire
A Wish list, a past..a holy contemption, my only try
to bring , my only time to see
Fallin down from the open sky lines, fallin down from the open frame
A corruption , at last, destroying our past
couldnt wait that long to say good bye
ahh good bye

verse 2
Feeling inside the jar for unspoken words
A ring of hope circles us with distance
A light will shine down ,an reach into the heart
just remember ive been here from the start
i feel..
i feel...

course
Falling down from the sky, fallling down into the burning fire
A Wish list, a past..a holy contemption, my only try
to bring , my only time to see
Fallin down from the open sky lines, fallin down from the open frame
A corruption , at last, destroying our past
couldnt wait that long to say good bye

verse 3
A rising color, flys around careless
Waving into a soon to be heard feelin
Dispense of matter, an disspatch yourself
You can see. the truths alive an well
you can see..the lifes begun to fade

course
Falling down an takin a look around, falling down, from a troubled tear
Falling down, show me wat your not, Falling down, show me your reflection
A question i ask, what do you feel, a promise that'd last, that died
I see whats wrong, in your eyes
I seeee..whats going on, in your eyes
JUST FLY FLY FLY FLY OUTTA MY LIFE
JUST FLY FLY FLY FLY OUTTA HERE AN OUTTA MY MIND

Im not sure how this site works since im new but umm..ok ya this is my sng so ya..
#2
Like the idea, but it's 'chorus' not 'course' and 'an leading' aint right grammatically, should be 'a leading'.
But good stuff, I don't mind it at all.
#3
i have the opposite feeling of the first comment. i didnt understand much of what was going on, the wording wasnt very smooth, i wasnt feeling the lyrics that i DID understand... i do agree theres something grammatically wrong with all that... i didnt like it much at all. sorry im being such a downer!
#4
this is such..a ..beautiful..work of art..i just..im not sure how to say how much i liked this..its just..i read this like 9 times..an its just like..something id write !! but better!! lol haha, man keep up the work!!