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lol cool foghorn at the start. I didn't really like the first riff though. Maybe try adding a melody to it? In some parts of this song it reminded me of oxiplegatz. The part that has two leads should be tremolo'd to give it more of a black feel i think. You have pretty great tone though, good job on that aspect. Slightly disappointed with the song length, those riffs could easily be added on to to become a 4-5 minute song. Also, maybe some symphonic elements would give it a nice touch. Im thinkin opera singer-style synth, especially during the part with those dual leads....

Im not sure if those were vocals or just some screams but it sounded alright...needs some work. Keep up the good work though, that was a refreshing listen.