#1
My new song, 'Valhalla is waiting for us' Please comment

He stood beneath the pale moon
The death of death is with us soon
Beneath the sky he faced his demon
The 14th song of a burning heathen
He walked along the path of the fallen
Shadowed trees and the woods are calling
Valhalla is waiting, I’m always falling

[bridge]

Starlight and steel are gleaming
Cover my ears, block out the screaming
Look up towards the bitter night
Your shadow clad within frostbite
Seek the light! Seek it for protection
The voices in your head whispering deception

Walk the path of the fallen
Shadowed trees, the woods are calling
Valhalla is waiting, I’m always falling
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#2
*bump*
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#3
Not bad, a bit cliche to a hardened viking metal fan but nothing too serious. I especially like the first verse.
Tiger style.
#4
*bump*
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#5
bumpin aint cool.
when im with you, there's nothing I wouldn't do, i just wanna be you're only one. im gasping out of straws, taken aback by what i saw that night before when we were all alone...
#6
cool song, i really enjoyed it.
My Gear:
Washburn Lyon Tele Copy
ESP LTD MH250NT
Samick D7-CE :
Digitech Death Metal Pedal
Dunlop Jimi Hendrix Wah
Peavy Renown Solo Series Amp