#1
It's extremely short- but since when did one need a lot of lyrics?

Heartbroken Is...

Heartbroken is counting the beams of light
coming from a lamppost, through frosted windows.

Heartbroken is knowing the revolutions per minute
of your ceiling fan.
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#2
Quote by anoceanapart
It's extremely short- but since when did one need a lot of lyrics?

Heartbroken Is...

Heartbroken is counting the beams of light
coming from a lamppost, through frosted windows.

Heartbroken is knowing the revolutions per minute
of your ceiling fan.



i dont really like it at all.knowing the revolutions per min. of ur ceiling fan?
i dont think that shows ur heartbroken, i think it shows ur really bored.no offence, im being honost.crit mine

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#3
I'm going to have to agree with Raggle. I'm not really getting the impression that you're heartbroken. While these are good lines, I don't think they fit with the subject.

And by the way...
Quote by anoceanapart
It's extremely short- but since when did one need a lot of lyrics?



You need 4 lines minimum or else the thread is closed.