#3
Great playing and very pro sounding, very impressive that you do all the instruments, as i know how hard that is, but at the same time the song blue sky is very unoriginal, so I think you should work on the writing of it more, or add lyrics. Crit mine if you please (sig)
#4
Quote by Gitter_Wizard
Great playing and very pro sounding, very impressive that you do all the instruments, as i know how hard that is, but at the same time the song blue sky is very unoriginal, so I think you should work on the writing of it more, or add lyrics. Crit mine if you please (sig)


thanks for the crit. i know it's not %100 original but hey what is original nowadays anyway.
Last edited by tater_salad at Jan 28, 2007,
#5
ya that true some lyrics would be awesome in that song and the chorus was good keep it up


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#6
That was good, you need a better title and some words and thatll be great. not really much to crit.