#1
Tearing limb by limb, Hope of the human destroyed
Where darkness dwells, it come from beyong the mind
From the knowledge of our most supernatural superiors it hides
The destroyer in reign, many dreams have died

In Human inside, nothing so utterly corruptful
Ive ever seen
Dreams shattered, It amazes me,
what words can mean
To the victims of this beast

The destroyer of Souls, leading to be damned,
Wielding the power to kill the mind.
#2
To be honest I liked it, maybe a little bit too malevolent for my taste but definitely something to tune up and work on. Try to think of a different word for superiors, imo it does not fit but who knows. Nice job though

If you could crit mine, "The Prize". It should be on this page, thanks