#1
Hey guys im in the process of writing a song and was wondering if the start below was ok i don't really know if i like it myself or not the song is about underage partys and coming home to have your parents have another go at you lol somethin which i get almost every weekend lol :P thanks in advance


It's late friday night
another week another party
I can't keep up with this life
this is gonna be the last time

A cold windy early morning
walking through the front door
i got off with another warning
this won't happen anymore
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