It sounds kind of sloppy because there's no distortion pedal and it was played on a really gay guitar & amp (first act). It's suppoused to be melodic metal though.

Just try and pretend it was played on an Ibanez with a distortion pedal, haha. What do you guys think?

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meh, if ya aint been playing very long fair enough, but who cares what other people think if u like it