#1
Came out in less than 5 minutes so its no where near done.. so please crit =) thanks

I waited too long
Opportunity far gone
And now there's nothing left for me

I had it all
Standing so tall
Didn't realize it 'till you left me


Two years passed you by
And you always wondered why
I wouldn't let you in
Why we couldn't be more than friends

Now this year's passing me by
And I already know why
You just won't be mine--
I've wasted too much time


This new guy treats you well
But time will never tell
How great we could have been

But its my fault it's this way
And there's nothing I can do today
There was never a beginning to our end


Two years passed you by
And you always wondered why
I wouldn't let you in
Why we couldn't be more than friends

Now this year's passing me by
And I already know why
You just won't be mine--
I've wasted too much time
#2
Guys... I really need some kind of feedback on this.. please.. I'm sorry if this counts as a bump..
#3
What it says is good.

Almost TOO poetic if that is possible, but if you have music that fits it, run with it.

N. AL? Same here. Rocket City myself.
Gear:
Charvel/Jackson 3B Bass
Jackson CMG Bass
Ibanez BTB575FM 5-String Bass
Vintage 70s Ampeg V9 SVT/ Ampeg 8x10 Cab
Fender Deluxe Blackout Telecaster

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