#1
only the third song ive ever written. any feedback would be hugely appreciated.

c4c.

www.myspace.com/olympusbleeds

love is for losers and ocean eyes are also written by me.
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#3
great guitar - very relaxing
i like the lyrics but the vocals are just okay i guess
they could use work but they deffinitely arent bad or anything
i think like some drums or bass would make this song a lot fuller

overall its very relaxing and I enjoyed it a lot.. gave me some ideas for my own stuff actually
ide give it an overall 6 and it could deff be up to a 8/9 with some more layers of instruments

crit mine please
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=8069928#post8069928
#4
Mate you live in bham uk!! That's my hometown.

Like this song, keep it up man. Your vocals have a lot of potential, guitar work seems clean enough.

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#5
I like the vibe. Good breakdowns in the song. I personally like the lyrics.

Tips...

- Too much vocal echo
- Record the guitar, then vocals, then backup vocals.
- When laying down vocals, don't be holding the microphone. Even if you have to, duct tape it to a makeshift mic stand. Too much clunking around during this recording.
- Be mindful of your recording levels. Believe me, I know how easy it is to lose yourself in the song, but be careful of how loud and soft your voice is on the recording levels, not just in your throat.

Don't get me wrong, though. I did like the song.
#6
thanks for feedback so far guys.
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