#1
Hi guys!

Could get some opinions and crit for these lyrics?
They are the lyrics for a thrash song
Thanks already!

Primitive Feelings

The anger I’ve kept inside me,
growing every minute destroying me from the inside…

I’ts choking me, killing me, can’t take it anymore…

All the people near me driving me
Insane without knowing it

The anger, much too strong
Can’t take it anymore
Can’t control myself
It drives me to things
I wouldn’t normally do

I slay, I torture, I destroy
Against my own will
I hunt, I seek, I find
It’s not my own mind, It’s the Anger,
Much too strong for me…

The Anger, hungry for blood!!!
Esp Ltd Viper Fm-200 with EMG HZ-4
Roland MicroCube
EHX Metal Muff
Last edited by lord_of_light at Jan 29, 2007,
#3
Yeah...It kinda means something to me.
Esp Ltd Viper Fm-200 with EMG HZ-4
Roland MicroCube
EHX Metal Muff
#4
they're dece, i wud prolly like'm more once i hear then in a song. the only thing i can critique is y call it hym for hate? you could call it somethign else and use hym for a whole different song
METAL
#5
well I didn't have any other titles ,but it's just a working title
Esp Ltd Viper Fm-200 with EMG HZ-4
Roland MicroCube
EHX Metal Muff
#6
Well written, but your ideas are completely unoriginal. I feel like I've read this before many times from different people in the past.

Work on being innovative with your words.