#1
i decide
at some point
this is what i am
sterilize hope

how far i ran
to meet this
repeat the phrase "i can"
feel it faulter

Chorus:

reach me
one last time
draw that line
let me try
i'll cross it one day
i'll be on our side

i can be all that i am
but inside without you
i am empty
waiting fo you to be here
so i can remember
what its like to hope

you will never change
no matter how deep i sink
no matter how far i drift
and in an instant
chaos crucified
dreams forever lost
redefined

in a heart beat
hope restored
in an instant
a new world

C4C
We're only strays.
#4
Quote by RUIN717
wat kinda band is this for, like what genre?


Well I'm in a regular metalcore band, but this is for my own stuff which is basicly metalcore with no screaming. But its starting to get more like... bluescore lol.

EDIT: post a links to songs.
We're only strays.
Last edited by Martyr's Prayer at Jan 29, 2007,
#6
very nice, it kinda 'radiated' emotion. quite in your face but subtle as well. good job 8/10.

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