#1
Stupid fantasy crap. Have fun.


The once lush wood now charred and burned
Crushed desires caused by vicious wyrm
We fought the bastard through glade and fen
Chased him back to his smold'ring den
Left behind, a wake of blood and doom
Still we followed on, through the gloom

Our raveaged army trudged forever on
Fighting to survive oblivion
The hounds of war and archers, dead
Staining the mighty dragon red
Our doom at hand we begged God for aid
He sent us help, twas a holy blade

Cornered, time to make a final stand
We had no time to formulate a plan
Our mighty warriors fall left and right
It was clear we wouldn't survive the night
Defeat was near, our will broken
When our hero dealt a mighty blow

Decapitated, the wyrm lay on the ground
Out of it's belly rolled a golden crown
The spoils of war fantastic but wouldn't replace
The great men that died gallantly that day
#2
The Wyrm
Stupid fantasy crap. Have fun.


The once lush wood now charred and burned
Crushed desires caused by vicious wyrm
We fought the bastard through glade and fen
Chased him back to his smold'ring den
Left behind, a wake of blood and doom
Still we followed on, through the gloom-------this verse was good until the last 2 lines.gloom and doom are common words, try differnt words

Our raveaged army trudged forever on
Fighting to survive oblivion
The hounds of war and archers, dead
Staining the mighty dragon red
Our doom at hand we begged God for aid
He sent us help, twas a holy blade

Cornered, time to make a final stand
We had no time to formulate a plan
Our mighty warriors fall left and right
It was clear we wouldn't survive the night
Defeat was near, our will broken
When our hero dealt a mighty blow

Decapitated, the wyrm lay on the ground
Out of it's belly rolled a golden crown ----------why did a crown spill out??
The spoils of war fantastic but wouldn't replace
The great men that died gallantly that day


not bad,basic rhyme scheme,but probly would never make it as a real song because of the subject, unless you used the dragon as like a metaphor, like our hman sins are represented by the dragon.
decent
6.5/10


crit mine
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=514001
#3
That it's for a spoof band. It's supposed to be mocking 80's metal bands that sounded like all their songs were about Lord of the Rings.