#1
I know, I got the title from the 4 works from Vivaldi, to clear that up. Anyway, comments would be apprechiated. They go to a Rush - ish song my bassist made. Thanks in advance!

The Four Seasons

Verse

And all of life is a stage
Passing through four short seasons
Life progresses sans meaning
And it all unfolds, and we all watch

Chorus
Spring is the first
The quickest one for all of you
Summer is next
The golden times, best to live through
Fall always comes
And gold fades into reddish hues
Winter ends all
Finally, but it completes you

Verse
We all carry our burdens
Lugging them through, the whole time
Missing the show every time
The actors pass in and out, and watch

Chorus

Childhood first
The quickest stage for all of you
Forever young
The golden times, best to live through
Lines cross the skin
And gold fades into reddish hues
We all fall down
Eventually, it completes you

Break

Verse

The four seasons we live through
Quickly transition from one
To another, then they’re gone
To understand their beauty, just watch

Chorus
Spring is the first
The quickest one for all of you
Summer is next
The golden times, best to live through
Fall always comes
And gold fades into reddish dust
Winter ends all
Finally, but it completes us
#2
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I know, I got the title from the 4 works from Vivaldi, to clear that up. Anyway, comments would be apprechiated. They go to a Rush - ish song my bassist made. Thanks in advance!

The Four Seasons

Verse

And all of life is a stage
Passing through four short seasons
Life progresses sans meaning
And it all unfolds, and we all watch

Chorus
Spring is the first
The quickest one for all of you
Summer is next
The golden times, best to live through
Fall always comes
And gold fades into reddish hues
Winter ends all
Finally, but it completes you

Verse
We all carry our burdens
Lugging them through, the whole time
Missing the show every time
The actors pass in and out, and watch

Chorus

Childhood first
The quickest stage for all of you
Forever young
The golden times, best to live through
Lines cross the skin
And gold fades into reddish hues
We all fall down
Eventually, it completes you

Break

Verse

The four seasons we live through
Quickly transition from one
To another, then they’re gone
To understand their beauty, just watch

Chorus
Spring is the first
The quickest one for all of you
Summer is next
The golden times, best to live through
Fall always comes
And gold fades into reddish dust
Winter ends all
Finally, but it completes us


I got nothing bad to say, it seems to flow with each other at some point, one thing i do have a problem is "And" to start off the song, seems almost rude. But then again im no better! Good Job!