#1
Just a warning, this is a song about a girl
crit 4 crit.


Love represented as Fire

Hello this is directed towards you my love
you have, oh you have everything youve ever dreamt of
I know oh i know i don't ****ing know
When everything you do just seems to get spit right back at you
and it shows, it shows, I just don't know

As I said you have it all
Standing so tall, Standing so tall
So take a step down
and help me up, don't be so selfish
Im not asking for much
So help me up and hold me close
It will only take a second
for me to lie to myself
As I said you have it all
Without me, you still stand tall.

And now you will take your leave
I will long for you, will you even think of me
and don't be surprised when the time is right, cuz I won't be there
cuz I won't wait around just for you to make another pointless call
cuz im so sick and tired of waiting around while you have another love affair

I don't want to get burned again
I don't want to get burned again

As I said you have it all
Standing so tall, Standing so tall
So take a step down
and help me up, don't be so selfish
Im not asking for much
So help me up and hold me close
It will only take a second
for me to lie to myself
As I said you have it all
Without me, you still stand tall.


Any and all crits are great, any suggestions on a name would be good.
#2
not too bad..... a lil rough edged but not bad.....gimme a lil bit and i'l thinkof a name lol