#1
This is the first 30 seconds of my song, its practically a big bass solo

Keep in mind I'am neither a guitarist, nor do i actually own a fretless bass (i use a simulator, i wish i had one)

Im open to suggestions, and any help with the guitar parts

P.S. this is my first creation



EDIT: updated, goes into a slap part
Attachments:
soothing cool thing.zip
Quote by unfathomable_bo
Well it isnt hard to bend a string that has the tension of a piece of well cooked spaghetti, especially when you have hands like goalkeeper gloves


My songs: (more to come) (C4C's)
Screams fell silent underneath the black sun
Last edited by Stolenidentity1 at Jan 30, 2007,
#2
so far it sounds good, the bass is excellent and the fretless is a nice touch. The guitar wasn't all that great, but it didn't seem like you tried to make it all that great up till here. I think it would sound cool if it got heavier and did some Primus style slapping or something later on. Idk, maybe that's not what your going for, but it's definitely in that vein. Crit one of mine? they're in my sig.
#3
thats exactly what i was thinking lol, ive been listening to alot of primus lately

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Quote by unfathomable_bo
Well it isnt hard to bend a string that has the tension of a piece of well cooked spaghetti, especially when you have hands like goalkeeper gloves


My songs: (more to come) (C4C's)
Screams fell silent underneath the black sun
#7
Nice song. Although that Synthy bass thing bugs me. I like the guitar though.
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