#1
Yeah, just a little something i wrote while i was bored. lemmie know what you think.

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Haven’t slept a wink in a week
Still my tears flow true
If you asked me to, I couldn’t speak
Not even a word to you

I’d shout out I love you
That’s all I ever wanted to say
I’d keeping shouting I love you
Tomorrow, the next, and the next day

The truth is all I’ve got, just take it
If we can’t make it through, let’s fake it
Please say it’s worth a shot, please say it
I can’t live without you, don’t break it

Haven’t seen the sun in some time
Still I can’t stand life
Cause you’re the only reason I rhyme
And I’ve got no reason tonight

I’ll shout out I love you
That’s all I ever wanted to say
I’d keeping shouting I love you
Tomorrow, the next, and the next day

The truth is all I’ve got, just take it
If we can’t make it through, let’s fake it
Please say it’s worth a shot, please say it
I wanna live with you, don’t break it

Just take my word for what it is
There’s no reason we should fake this
Please say yes, and follow me home
Don’t break this dream that only we own

That only we own

I’ll shout out I love you
That’s all I ever wanted to say
I’d keeping shouting I love you
Tomorrow, the next, and the next day
(x2)

Tomorrow, the next, and the next day
(x2)

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thanks in advance, Crit4Crit
#4
"Cause you’re the only reason I rhyme
And I’ve got no reason tonight"

That is my favorite part. Overall the song is very well written but the line "I'll shout out I love you" seems a lot shorter than the other lines so maybe you could switch it to I'll shout out that I love you or something like that.
I also thing the title should be I'd Shout Out, I'd Shout It Out, or maybe just Shout It Out.

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