#1
Heya up people..Well I wrote a riff in drop C..Just wanna see what you all think..Its kinda of rough..I'm thinking of changing parts already like in the intro puttin in another harmony..Please take a look and constructive critism only please..

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#2
'ey... i usually don't like that type of music but for the guitar work it sounded good. I like the main riff and it seems like you could really build something off of it. Only thing i suggest is just a tad more tone for some crunch but sounded good otherwise.
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#4
hehe yeh i felt in the intro riff was alrite but was missing somethin...so i added an extra harmony it sounds alrite...its defiantly the basis for a nice tune..i never normally feel like this bout music I write but this one got my goin..

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Last edited by Maddy! at Jan 31, 2007,