#2
i really liked above your mind .the singing wasnt that bad in it . i didnt like the first lead but the last lead was pretty good and i like the lyrics.

the bottle live was ok. a lil sloppy. i like the the main riff and the lead

I really liked fire. the lead in it was prolly the best in all ur songs and the lyris were pretty. the vocals werent bad either. but towards the end it got sloppy.It sounded really like nivana to me. u should make a studio version of fire


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#3
yeah those live songs are pretty old, like from November, it was only our second show so we were pretty sloppy. What did you think of the last one?