#1
Forget hopes its dreams now...
As your hill gets so much steeper.
Like a line you have passed its what i call your last chance.

Another brick as your wall gets taller
another hit as you world shrinks smaller
Like a line you have passed its what i call your last chance.

Faces are changing
No freinds just strangers
Faces are changing
No freinds just strangers

Your soon to vanish leaving skin and bones.
Plus a trail of hate through the things youve done
Like a line you have passed its what i call your last chance.

Memorys are are now thin to nothing....
Hard to think you could ve been something.
Again Like a line you have passed you was..ted your last chance.

Faces are changing
No freinds just strangers
Faces are changing
No freinds just strangers


Can someone please crit this for me.
Thank You.

#3
Thank you for the coment much appreciated.
I played it on an acoustic using only 5 chords.
G, G/F#, Em7, D, Cadd9.
It sounds like a shed 7 song i have been told.
Not sure exactly what style i can place it under, but say its a moderate speed acoustic peice.

Thanks again for the reply.
#5
Yeah, What Type Of Music Is it?

Its Great Lyrics, Don't get me Wrong.
But I need to know If its Rock Or What?
#6
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Cheers for the comment.
It would come under the cat of indie rock.
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