#1
Just found this site and thought id start contributing, this song was made in the last 10 minutes but was a topic I had thought of the other day at work when I found out about someone I like whois leaving...comments appriciated, thanks.
P.s. havent edited much.


Verse 1:
Today I found out
What the fuss was about
Is it true that your going away...?

I wish I was with you
And I knew what to do
But it dragged on day by day...


Lift:
Two weeks is all thats left with you,
I hope these feelings I have are true,
I dare not ask incase I hear,
incase I hear...
incase I hear...

Chorus
It was nothing but impossible love,
A love so helpless from above,
You couldnt make it if you try,
Impossible it make me cry-y-y-y-y....


Verse 2:
We only ever said hello
Now its time to go
Why didn't we get it on...?

Whats that in your eyes
There is no suprise
Cos your heart and soul is gone...

Lift:
Two weeks is all thats left with you,
I hope these feelings I have are true,
I dare not ask incase I hear,
incase I hear...
incase I hear...

Chorus
It was nothing but impossible love,
A love so helpless from above,
You couldnt make it if you try,
Impossible it make me cry-y-y-y-y....
Chorus
It was nothing but impossible love,
A love so helpless from above,
You couldnt make it if you try,
Impossible it make me cry-y-y-y-y....
#2
it is ok but i dont like the whole three lines in a stanza thing... seems incomplete, to me.the rest was ok. i like how u wrote cry-y-y-y-y hahaha made me giggle
Why do I let myself drown n the tears Ive cried4u over&over again When I know that u wont rescue me?
THE HARDEST GIFT2GIVE IS LOVE U KNOW IS NOT RETURNED
Whats the point n smilin if u hav no1 2smile4