#1
Hello its me, your future beloved estranged ex husband,

i got a news from the future that you're dying in the past,

so i took the chance to go to your funeral,

its awkward - must i cry for you?

i never ever met you before,

but i felt something when looking at your decomposing corpse,

maybe it's coz your my future beloved ex-wife,

you got our photos together,

my name's in your will,

tattoed my name on your wrist,

but i really never knew you,

was i shocked cause of youre death?

or did i suffer from amnesia?

or am i just crazy?
#2
im soo confused...
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#3
kinda confusing
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#4
Hello its me, your future beloved estranged ex husband,

i got a news from the future that you're dying in the past,

so i took the chance to go to your funeral,

its awkward - must i cry for you?

i never ever met you before,

but i felt something when looking at your decomposing corpse,

maybe it's coz your my future beloved ex-wife,

you got our photos together,

my name's in your will,

tattoed my name on your wrist,

but i really never knew you,

was i shocked cause of youre death?

or did i suffer from amnesia?

or am i just crazy?


this is interesting, a little confusing, but not to much.sorry but im just not to much into poems.but it is pretty good.

crit one of my newest if u could