#1
More of a poem than a song
i probably will make it into a song though


Where do I go now?
I am so lost now
Never to be found
Wishing you were with me

I endure this persistent pain
Trudging through with all my might
Because this hurt is like a child's train
Stuck constant motion

But i wear this shadowy mask
To cover my face of scars
And even though you were with me in the past
You will still remain in my heart
#2
I like it, but for how short it is the contrast either helps it alot or hurts it, Make into into a song, a love and hate theme would be cool. crit 4 crit i got 2 up on main page
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